Update to incl more rooms

ButteredToast4.inform/Source/story.ni

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-"Buttered Toast: the Great Dungeon Caper" by "William Moore".
+"Buttered Toast, the Great Dungeon Caper" by "William Moore".
 
 Chapter 0 - License and General Set Up
 
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@ Chapter 0 - License and General Set Up
 Chapter 1 - General Set Up
 
 The release number is 1.
-The story description is "An interactive fiction of capering around a mega structure with the hopes of finding true...whatever.".
+The story description is "An interactive fiction of capering around a mega structure with the hopes of finding true -- whatever.".
 Release along with cover art, an interpreter, library card, and the source text.
 Include Basic Screen Effects by Emily Short.
 
@@ -26,7 +26,7 @@ Response
 "Corey Corem has put out his latest album containing all new classics. You can find 'It's a Plea Bargain, Baby!' with the hit single 'Hit and Run in the Summer Sun' is available on all your favorite streaming platforms and local stores."
 "And that, folks, was the latest trailer for 'Hands Off My Burrito!', the lastest film in the Billy Davis Cinematic Universe. Well, it was exactly what I expected. Let's just say!"
 "The ex-wife of Firenze Prumt was found dead today in an apparent suicide while falling down the stairs. This comes days after said she has dirt on his activities many have claimed are illegal in nature."
-"Enjoy the newest, hippest, greatest chip in town: Mumford Chips. Mumford Chips: the chips that make you...gruuuuuuunt! Made by S.C. Johnson Wax."
+"Enjoy the newest, hippest, greatest chip in town: Mumford Chips. Mumford Chips: the chips that make you -- gruuuuuuunt! Made by S.C. Johnson Wax."
 "Drink Pepso! The only drink made with real pepsin!"
 
 Table of Melkior Responses
@@ -41,8 +41,16 @@ Table of Mr Linendot Sayings
 Saying
 "Mr Linendot smiles and says 'Hi, kids! I'm Mr. Linendot the officially unofficial spokesperson of Pepso: the only drink made with real pepsin!'"
 "Mr Linendot offers you an unmarked can and shouts 'Hi, kids! I'm Mr. Linendot! Try the new 'refreshing' flavor of Pepso: 'vanilla'!'"
-"Mr Linendot frowns and says 'I'm legally required to use air quotes so as not to be sued by Pepso...again..."
+"Mr Linendot frowns and says 'I'm legally required to use air quotes so as not to be sued by Pepso -- again --'"
-"Mr Linendot says 'Hi, kids! I'm Mr. Linendot here to tell you about the delicious beverage Pepso. The only drink made with real pepsin and now comes in a new refreshing flavor of 'vanilla'. And remember kids, I can no longer say they are the official sponsor of the show as that has never been the case.' He drinks a Pepso 'And here comes my lunch...'"
+"Mr Linendot says 'Hi, kids! I'm Mr. Linendot here to tell you about the delicious beverage Pepso. The only drink made with real pepsin and now comes in a new refreshing flavor of 'vanilla'. And remember kids, I can no longer say they are the official sponsor of the show as that has never been the case.' He drinks a Pepso 'And here comes my lunch --'"
+
+Table of BvE Responses
+Response
+"This is not going to be a home for orphans. BWAHAHAHAHA! This is going to be a place for hopes and dreams!"
+"If you think the good people will allow you to defend the righteous sitting down, you're wrong. They will join the cause!"
+"While many identify with their passions, it is better to take a calmer approach. That is unless justice is perverted."
+"MWUAHAHAHAHAHAHA! The hospital for orphans will give them the best care that they so desperately deserve."
+"Many say I lack compassion when dealing with my enemies and this is true because those who would harm the less fortunate are not deserving of compassion!"
 
 Table of Basic Help Commands
 command	description
@@ -116,11 +124,16 @@ Spork in the Road is a room. It is west of Hall of Pictures. The description is
 Leftward Path is a room. It is southwest of Spork in the Road. The description is "This path goes on and on leftward.".
 Rightward Path is a room. It is southeast of Spork in the Road. The description is "The room is like the others except it does not go anywhere other than where you entered.".
 Cheese Shop is a room. The description is "For some reason, there is a English-style cheese shop in the middle of a dungeon.".
-Brick Transition Hallway is a room. It is south of Leftward Path. The printed name is "Long Hallway". The description is "[if unvisited]This long hallway meanders around. After several hours, you discover that half of the hallway is brick and the other half is carved out of the living stone. There is an open archway made of brick leading to the southwest.[otherwise]The long, meandering hallway is made halfway of brick and halfway of carved stone. There is an open archway made of brick leading to the southwest.".
+Brick Transition Hallway is a room. It is south of Leftward Path. The printed name is "Long Hallway". The description is "[if unvisited]This long hallway meanders around. After several hours, you discover that half of the hallway is brick and the other half is carved out of the living stone. There is an open archway made of brick leading to the southwest.[otherwise]The long, meandering hallway is made halfway of brick and halfway of carved stone. There is an open archway made of brick leading to the southwest. Another archway leads to the west.".
-Potato Room is a room. It is southwest of the Brick Transition Hallway. The description is "This tall, vaulted ceiling room is chock full of potatoes.".
+Potato Room is a room. It is southwest of the Brick Transition Hallway. The description is "This tall, vaulted ceiling room is chock full of potatoes. There is a way out to the northeast. There are brown stairs leading up that appear to be made of tightly packed potato skins.".
+Presser Release Room is a room. It is west of the Brick Transition Hallway. The description is "Silent figures in robes that are barely visible are in this room. At the front is a stage with Baron von Evil on it behind a podium. There is a way leading out to the east.".
+
+Kansas City Missouri Financial District is a room. It is above the Potato Room. The printed name is "Kansas City, Missouri Financial District". The description is "The Kansas City, Missouri Finance District is south of the City Market, east of the Library, west of the East Village, and north of the Power and Light Districts. There are several tall, rectangular buildings made of steel and glass, burying their past. Commerce Bank stands to the northwest.[if unvisited][paragraph break]As you climb out of the sewer, two men walk past you. One says 'You know what? We should visit Stull!'. The other scowls and says 'You know what? You should have good ideas instead!'".
+Commerce Bank is a room. The description is "Commerce Bank has a gigantic lobby and people constantly milling about. It's fairly cool looking from the white marble floors to the marble pillars. There's not much else here. People are trying to do business and don't have much in the way of time for you!".
 
 Pie Room Door is a door. It is southeast of Dungeon 1 Meet & Greet Room. It is northwest of Pie Room. It is closed and locked. The description is "The rock door has fading words scrawled on them that say 'Speak the lines and dots and you may enter.'".
 Cheese Shop Door is a door. It is west of the Leftward Path. It is east of the Cheese Shop. It is closed. The description is "It is yellow and made of wood with the picture of a wheel of cheese with a huge slice taken out of it.".
+Door to Commerce Bank is a door. It is northwest of Kansas City Financial District. It is east of Commerce Bank. The description is "The revolving door leading into Commerce Bank has a decorative and iconic overhang.".
 
 Chapter 4 - Actors
 
@@ -130,7 +143,10 @@ Melkior is a person. The description is "He is an Eldarim turned undead after pl
 Darcon is a man. He is in Leftward Path. The description is "He looks like a typical cook wearing a black shirt and pants. Darcon is laying on the floor in the fetal position muttering 'Two men enter, no man leave! Two men enter, no man leave!'".
 Cheese Shopkeep is a man. He is in Cheese Shop. The description is "He is a short middle-aged man with black hair and a black moustache.".
 Cheese Shop Dancer is a man. He is in Cheese Shop. The description is "He is an averaged sized man, wearing a black suit and a black bowler hat. He is stepping one foot forward and backwards, then switching off the feed, all to the time of some slow cacodaemoniacal beat coming from the ether.".
-Baron von Evil is a man. The description is "He is dressed like an old-timey silent film villain. His hair is wild and unkempt and has 'crazy eyes'. His teeth are sharpened and yellow."
+Baron von Evil is a man. He is in the Presser Release Room. The description is "He is dressed like an old-timey silent film villain. His hair is wild and unkempt and has 'crazy eyes'. His teeth are sharpened and yellow.".
+Lord Goodfellow is a man. He is in the Presser Release Room. The description is "He is dressed in the finest of materials with a black top hat, a black tuxedo, and a pocketwatch secured inside a pocket on the chest of his tuxedo with a chain protruding outward and attached to something inside his pants pocket.".
+Bad Cop is a man. He is in Commerce Bank. The description is "He is a white man with a shaved head that is dressed in the finest blue of the KCMO police force.".
+Corrupt Cop is a man. He is in Commerce Bank. The description is "He is a white man with black, buzz cut hair and dressed in the finest blue of the KCMO police force.".
 
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 The Narrator is a person. Understand "narr" as the Narrator. They are in Poorly Lit Room. The description is "The narrator is well-dressed and young looking. However, what their true form is beguiling. They look like they urgently want to speak with you.".
@@ -169,6 +185,10 @@ Cheddar is a thing. It is fixed in place. It is in the Cheese Shop. The descript
 Venezuelan Beaver Cheese is a thing. It is fixed in place. It is in the Cheese Shop. The description is "A cake of the world-class, and famous, Venezuelan beaver cheese.".
 Limburger is a thing. It is fixed in place. It is in the Cheese Shop. The description is "A hunk of the smelliest cheese, you swear, in the world.".
 Bag of Potatoes is a thing. It is in the Potato Room. The description is "A large, brown burlap sack that is opened at the top revealing it is full of potatoes.".
+Podium is a container. It is fixed in place. It is in the Presser Release Room. The description is "A standard black, wooden podium. In it there appears to be papers.".
+Speech Papers is a thing. It is in the Podium. The description is "These papers contain the neat scrawlings of a speech written by Baron von Evil. Included among them is an artists interpretation of a children's hospital.".
+Commerce Bank Lobby Locker is a container. It is closed. It is openable. It is fixed in place. It is in Commerce Bank. The description is "The steel locker that is covered in money green paint is quite tall (a full head taller than you at least) and is located at the far end of the lobby.".
+Dead Body is a thing. The description is "Yup, it's dead, Jim. At least that's what would be said if your name were 'Jim'.".
 
 Chapter 6 - Actions
 
@@ -219,6 +239,13 @@ After talking when noun is Melkior:
 	let rr be a random number from 1 to number of rows in Table of Melkior Responses;
 	say "[Response in row rr of Table of Melkior Responses]".
 
+After talking when noun is Baron von Evil:
+	let rr be a random number from 1 to number of rows in Table of BvE Responses;
+	say "[Response in row rr of Table of BvE Responses]".
+
+After talking when noun is Lord Goodfellow:
+	say "Lord Goodfellow snorts derisively and says 'The great thing about the poor is they illustrate how rich I am'.".
+
 Carry out talking when noun is Mr Linendot:
 	let rr be a random number from 1 to number of rows in Table of Mr Linendot Sayings;
 	say "[Saying in row rr of Table of Mr Linendot Sayings]";
@@ -330,7 +357,8 @@ Carry out talking when the noun is Marshie:
 	say "I really hungry. I could go for some pie right about now.".
 
 Carry out talking when the noun is Mr Linendot and player is not carrying Can of Rhubarb Pepso:
-	say "Mr Linendot says 'Have this can of rhubarb pepso on the house!'";
+	say "Mr Linendot says 'Hey, kids! Welcome to the Buttered Toast, the Great Dungeon Caper. A scavenger hunt -- that is exactly like last year.'";
+	say "Mr Linendot looks you up and down. 'Oh! You're not a kid. Whatever! I don't really care at this point in my life. Hurry up or you don't get the [bold type]impressive[roman type] reward. Also, have this can of rhubarb pepso on the house!'";
 	increase the score of the player by 10;
 	move can of rhubarb pepso to location of the player;
 	silently try taking the can of rhubarb pepso.
@@ -360,6 +388,17 @@ After talking when the noun is Mr Linendot and the Pie Room Door is locked:
 	increase the score of the player by 10;
 	now the Pie Room Door is unlocked.
 
+
+After opening Commerce Bank Lobby Locker:
+	if Dead Body is not in Commerce Bank:
+		move Dead Body to Commerce Bank;
+		say "Once you open the locker a dead body falls out of it. Several people passing by scream, alerting the two police officers.";
+		say "[paragraph break]Corrupt Cop stomps over to you and says 'Well, well, well! Lookit what we have here! We found a body that is stabbed to death. And, oh, what did i just find on you? A knife!'";
+		say "[paragraph break]Bad Cop marches and paces around the room, shaking his head, and shooting icy glares at you.";
+		say "[paragraph break]Corrupt Cop shouts 'I think we've found our murderer!'";
+	otherwise:
+		continue the action.
+
 [ For displaying figures ]
 
 After examining the Giant Spork:
@@ -420,4 +459,4 @@ Chapter 8 - Tests
 
 test happypath with "x mr / x tv / x door / talk to mr / se / x cherry / x blueberry / get cherry / sw / x marshie / give pie to marshie / s / w / x bucket / x fountain / get bucket / insert bucket into fountain / e / e / x goldfish / put goldfish into bucket / w / put bucket into ginormous aquarium / s / x Painting of the Tower of Plargh /
  x Painting of Mirren Lisa / x Photo of a Deaf Zeppelin / x Painting of Dogs Playing Yahtzee / take Painting of Dogs Playing Yahtzee / w / x spork / drink pepso / sw / enter Cheese Shop Door / x cheddar / x venezuelan beaver cheese / x limburger / talk to shopkeep / point at cheddar / point at venezuelan beaver cheese / point at limburger / e /
- s / sw / x potatoes / take potatoes / eat potatoes".
+ s / sw / x potatoes / take potatoes / eat potatoes / ne / w / x podium / get papers / x papers / x baron von evil / x lord goodfellow / talk to lord goodfellow / e / sw / u / nw / open locker".